AlbrechtE:
I'm working on my first proper WG story and am wanting to find one or two people who are willing to read it and give honest and thoughtful feedback. If you're the sort of person whos only critique is "I liked it!" then please don't send me DMs asking to see it. Its nothing personal, but that kind of feedback isn't actually very helpful to writers(or any artist for that matter). To avoid spoilers, as I plan to post the story by chapter on my DeviantArt initially, I can fill you in on the details of the story in a DM but I will say outright that I'm not dealing with death feedism or extreme slob.
Just shoot me a message if you'd like to take a look, but I'll only be letting a couple of people preview it before its complete.
Hey,
I do some writing myself. I am not the best editor, but I know what kind of feedback I like to receive myself. I can always try to see if I can do something for you